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First type of diabetes disease is call insulin dependent diabetes. so there is not enough amount of insulin to regulate blood sugar level in human body. All the patients in this situations needs insulin treatments to compensate abnormal level of insulin hormone in the bodies. It is sure. Most can be under 30 year and some statistics say that most of cases type one diabetes is this like 70% and first boy was treated was 1922 called Leonard Thomson. Research people try to know what can be cause of type one of diabetes and some factors are genetic and environmental and immunological factors and many risks. It’s hard to know how to make this problem better.
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